It's here. I chose to submit it as is. Let me know if you'd like a better ending.
*UPDATE*
I completed my poem for publication, however, it is not finished because I have in mind a better ending (yes, we all knew that this would happen). It should be done by this weekend -- maybe.
I will submit my poem on Tuesday 10 April. I repeat, I will be submitting a new poem (strange, huh?) on Tuesday 10 April. That is all.
(My deepest thanks to everyone who reads and lets me know how I've done on it.)




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"Though lovers be lost, love shall not,
And death shall have no dominion."
I'm good. I've been in college for about a month also. It's pretty tough. =/ So much homework. I feel like it never ends.
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I think it is immoral, the fact that I have settled into sustenance
That I still shower, eat, and sleep
And have not fallen into disrepair
Doesn't she read what you write?? What happened??
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Let's Ban Humans. They All Suck Anyway
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Let's Ban Humans. They All Suck Anyway
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Why Arsey and Me Were Banned
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Storm-Artists, Sheezy
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